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Today I wrote this poem,but I'm not sure if it's good.It doesn't have the thingsmy teacher says a poem should.It doesn't share the feelingsI have deep inside of me.It hasn't any metaphorsand not one simile.It's missing any narrative.Alliteration too.It isn't an acrostic,diamante, or haiku.There's nothing that's personified.It doesn't have a plot.I'm pretty sure that rhymingis the only thing it's got.It sure was fun to write it,and I think it's long enough.It's just too bad it's missingall that great poetic stuff.I put it on my teacher's deskand, wow, she made a fuss.She handed back my poemwith an A++++! |
