托福写作：如何锻造地道英语句子-2
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. 16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills. 改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 19. They cannot think clearly. 改进: They cannot think straight. 20. Money can improve their living standard. 改进: Money can improve their life |
