2013考研英语一大作文范文与解析（文都版）

2013考研英语一大作文范文与解析

文都教育名师韩苏

2013年英语一大作文图仍然延续了考研之前几年的考察内容，即考研了与大学生相关的六类主题其中之一。这六类话题为：第一种：人的健康；第二种：人的成长；第三种：社会的环境问题；第四种：社会的义务与责任；第五类：文化的好现象；第六种：文化的坏现象。

观察2013大作文图片可以得到以下的相关信息：图中的年轻人为大学生；2.走在路上，目标众多。

在文都的课堂上，我们强调“描述图片：抽象为主”的描述原则，所以在面对此图片时，我们可以将其归类于六类主题中的“人的成长”，即“在路上的年轻人”的抽象含义。而多条道路就是，成长中的选择和机会。

所以，描述图片人物可以使用，词汇较为简单的“young people”，其余的内容可以使用六大类词汇中的成长内容，进行写作。如：confidence、Attainment、achieve attainments、striving spirit、surmount the difficulties等即可。

在此再次强调写作的相关要点如下：（1）描述图片：抽象为主；（2）说明现象：会写为主；（3）分析原因：靠谱为主；（4）建议对策：普通为主。

结合授课内容以及六大主题词可写出范文，如下：

As is vividly depicted in the picture, many young people are standing together when they find that there are so many ways to go.Thus，all of them are stopping there and waiting for help. Obviously, it is the shortage of confidence for their future that makes it impossible for them to get the attainment they want to.

Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce and there are more and more chance for us to get. But it is impossible for the ones to achieve attainments if the ones have no striving spirit to surmount the difficulties. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the striving spirit. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of fighting is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

To my way of thinking，the problem that all of the college are just stopping and waiting but no fighting and thinking will generate severe consequences .Measures should be adopted before things get worse. It is high time that all of us ,parents, educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to make young people change their outlook of life and acquire determined spirit. Only by this way is it reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future. (238)