心得分享:感悟托福作文是写给全世界看的

     今天，我反复研究了一篇ets托福的6分作文，给我最深的感受就是任何一篇ets打上了6分的作文，应该都是可以传到世界上每一个考托福角落的考生手上的作文，"它"经得起时间的考验，基本上经得起每一个托福考生的考验，基本上过得了每一个托福研究机构的眼睛。它所要做到的，如果让我用两个字来概括它的内涵，让我想起的是“中庸”二字。

今天，ets要我写“音乐反应中国文化”的论题，我的心有点震撼.....因为在这么短的时间，这么少的字，要表现这么一个深刻的主题，是不容易的。我想把我今天写的这篇文章先交给我的母校--武汉大学的这块小小的论坛板块上的学友看看，看看能否经得起同学们的眼睛。因为我想，我们gter在写托福作文的时候，ets是通过我们来了解我们，不但我们的写作水平，还了解我们这个人，另外的，通过千千万万对于这个论题写作的中国学生来看我们的民族，来了解我们的文化，同时增长ets本身的见识和水平。另外，ets还可能要把你的6分作文传到世界上所有考托福的考生的手上，经起全球gter的考验，你所反映的民族文化会影响看到所有看你作文的人。所以，我本人也不敢马虎。在这里，我先拿出的是自己的作文。接着的是ets的参考6分作文。我想,这两篇作文的距离到底有多远呢？我的英语水平很差，能力也非常有限，请各位学兄，学姐，学弟，学妹倾情指教。

ets是这样平静而有深度的提问的“Music tells us something about a culture.What does the music of your country reveal about of your country?Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.”

答：

It is very lucky for me to introduce the music of our motherland,china,to the friends who come from different parts of the world.The topic about the relationships between the music and our culture is so large for me to reveal its deep and gorgeous personality in such a short essay ,for that our motherland has such a long history ,has so many different areas,and so many people.And different area has different styleof music in different stage of her history.But in our heart,one point is certain:we have a common motherland:China.

In different stage of this ancient civilized country,she conceives different musics,and these musics correspond to different cultures.Among all of these musicics,what I would like to introduce to you is the classical music which is performanced by zheng,a Chinese zither with 25strings，because in the ancient time ,the great thinker Confucius said 'music is used to teach people of the country'And he supported that music which is on the same way of nature fits everyone in every different stage of history.It traverses history and transcends boundaries between different countries .Zheng,for example,if you have opportunity to listen to its music,you may hear nature.You may feel that you are talking to nature.You can hear the blossoming of flowers,the flowing of rivulet,the rolling of tides to deep sea .You can see the working of honest people and the love of nature that comes from your deep heart.Listen hard,then you see the great heros living in history;the splendor of this glebe;the smiles of the beauties....then you appreceive the grandness of the deep culture of this ancient country.This is the verve of these 25strings :simple,plain,ordinary ,but its charm is vast,deep,gorgeous,and distant.It is possible that every people who has once felt it would never forget it as you never forget the beauty of nature and the personality of yourself.The charm of the music ,just as you listen to it.When you feel it,you can touch the heart of its deep culture.I don't know if I could change the topic a little"Music tells us much about a culture".To learn its culture,you had better listen to its music first.